All Comments on 'The New Girl Ch. 14'

As always, absolutely amazing!

It’s been a long time coming, well worth the wait

great to see your back. personally i feel the deal should've been 4 days and morrigan has full access to tom. (that's just me and i think morrigan should steal tom away) but great story overall. makes me curious if morrigan is gonna give her sister the nutrition pill and start feeding tom with it

Amazing one, Thank you!

Glad to see our little slut has returned. Hope for more. Keep up the great writing.

You compose the whole story very nicely and show both the real emotions between the characters and the feelings they trigger towards each other. Interesting is the approach of the older Morgan sister to the more aggressive, dominant sister Frey and her subordination, and both sisters to Tom who is completely submissive, subordinate to the sisters, especially Frey. You beautifully describe the intimate sex scenes between Frey and Tom and Frey and Morgan, like Morgan with Tom or both sisters with Tom. I am very much looking forward to the further fate of Tom (with whom I have grown very attached and I am even very jealous that I cannot be in his place) and how Freya will continue to use her sister Morgan and Tom. Will there be a complete transformation of Tom into a girl? Best regards from Poland, SissyBoy from Warsaw. 📝🧒🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👩🏻‍🦳❤️ 👩🏻

Bardzo fajnie komponujesz całą historię i ukazujesz zarówno prawdziwe emocje pomiędzy bohaterami jak i uczucia które wyzwalają wobec siebie. Ciekawe jest podejście starszej z sióstr Morgan do bardziej agresywnej, dominującej siostry Frey i jej się podporządkowanie oraz obu sióstr do Toma który jest całkowicie uległy, podporządkowany siostrom a w szczególności Frey. Pięknie opisujesz sceny intymne seks pomiędzy Frey i Tomem oraz Frey i Morgan, jak Morgan z Tomem czy obu sióstr z Tomem. Czekam bardzo na dalsze losy Toma (z którym się bardzo zżyłem i nawet bardzo zazdroszczę że nie mogę być na jego miejscu) oraz jak dalej Freya będzie wykorzystywała swoją siostrę Morgan i Toma. Czy dojdzie do całkowitej zmiany Toma w dziewczynę? Pozdrawiam Serdecznie z Polski, SissyBoy z Warszawy. 📝🧒🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👩🏻‍🦳❤️ 👩🏻

I hope you continue this one day. Excellent.

I originally wanted to call this the best chapter yet but thinking back, they have all been equally brilliant. In my opinion you have created such a well working, beautiful story that places way above any others in this genre. You keep elevating your writing with very appealing tropes like futa on futa (or sister on alter) or Tom being on the giving end every once in a while. I really hope to see this continued at some point. Loved the chapter being longer as well!

WOW!!! Love this story alot couldn't put it down being captivating. An all in the lifestyle, love, domination, violence, desire , lust, obedience, domination an twists withe the characters would love to be in toms position of life in that household, with lots of carnal desires from the whole family. An the choice of a career or total submission for as long as possible I would except it 5he only thing I would workout more just to keep the stamina up when ever there was a time not being used. The hose slut pet for all to use.

The end sucked after that explosive close of the other chapter. I would love to read more of this story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅👅