All Comments on 'The New Neighbor: Sex Witch! Ch. 02'

Nice. Wonder what crisis our good Witch will solve next...

With something to please everyone....the only thing I would change is the first paragraph...too many "its"!

I honestly hope to read more about the sex witch.. shes a compelling character.

excellent writing and writing style. however, please have your stories proofed (by someone else) for consistency e.g., 'Carly' switches to 'Carla' in some passages. otherwise, i enjoy reading your stories -- i hope to read more in 2005!

Totally erotic followup to chapter one. I loved when Lisa successfully seduced Norma. Lisa is my favorite of all your incredible women. You have a mega talent as a writer, so I hope you will crank out more and more great stories.

Loved both chapters. I do hope you go on ,this could be a long saga !!!!! Emma in NJ

the story it good. i liked it. i thought there would be magic usage in it.

Yesss. The anticipation I wondered about in chapter 01 was well represented in chapter 02. I really appreciate that you never let your characters just do sex acts. You let us hear their thoughts. You have the characters talk to each other. Dialogue is an essential part of higher quality sex. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Nice job. The lesbian hottie of a sex witch and the tenderness between too sisters. Brilliant combo.

You are an excellent writer of sensual erotica, the story moves so smoothly, making it easy to feel the reality of it all. You must be a very sensual person! Thank you

Having built their sexual skills and desires within the family there are so many directions this could go. Wish you had. You write so well, with sex scenes that are not laboured by very sensual. I could see this culminating into an incestuous orgy that is all-girl or mixed, perhaps bringing in more neighbours under the witch's spell.

I really enjoyed these 2 chapters of sexy stories. I even quite enjoyed the heterosexual parts nicely written. Considering I am not into the supernatural ( though it wasn’t really super natural because I would have stopped reading almost straight away)

She can cast a spell on my anytime she wants to.