All Comments on 'The New Neighbors'

by NotHemingway

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goodshoes2goodshoes210 months ago

Good, but it fell short at the end. Could have been a part 2, or more added to this part for more descriptive sex scenes. Maybe a swap?

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler10 months ago

Sexy and sweet. Love to see an unnecessarily cold woman open up to the pleasures of erotic interludes. I want Claude to fuck her from behind whilst fondling her large breasts and drain himself inside of her. Cheers 🥂

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Is there no one in America that knows the difference between lie, lay, laid etc? You get it wrong every time.

GreyMatter46GreyMatter4610 months ago

Need a part 2? Swapping?

Wiz1002Wiz100210 months ago

A fabulous concept for a story, but I’m afraid it was a little rushed at the end. I was expecting the the couples would have swapped partners, or the girls getting it on with each other, even if it was only a bit of kissing and nipple sucking - it would have ended things beautifully!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Quite titillating. Sort of an Amuse-bouche erotica, if you will.

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I write for a living, although not fiction. I enjoy stories where the eroticism flows from the narrative, and the specifics are left to one's imagination. I am often accused of being short on descriptions of sex acts, but I'm trying to do better in that regard. All comments...