All Comments on 'The New Pills'

Overall, a good story. I liked it . Thanks for your time and imagination.

Another chapter with sis getting pregnant and Marcus marrying Laura would be great.

Your stories are so hot, I like them all.

I'm sorry but I have to comment on the grammar. Your use of 'seen' is driving me nuts! I 'saw' the same thing that you have seen. Basically, if it needs the word 'have' in front of it, it's 'seen'. If 'have' doesn't work in the sentence, it's' saw'. Again, sorry. I don't read these stories to critic them but that word use has been slapping me around in nearly every one of your stories. I do enjoy reading your work, it's sexy and fun!

Just read this for the second time and it is still a very hot story. I was hoping in the next chapter he had knocked up his siter and Laura and they all decided to live together. Happy endings like that are really feel good stuff.

So sucking fucking hot, absolutely loved it. My live in fuck buddies and I acted out some of this and enjoyed some red hot fucking and sucking, me eating one cunt while fucking my cock into the other, when their two besties walk in and join us in an all out pure sex orgy, cunt cunt and more cunt, fabulous. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

I hope we get a sequel that shows them years later.