All Comments on 'The New Programmer'

by JupiterMars

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I like the story

BUT! The one thing missing to make this a Romance is he did NOT ask her to marry him. SO this only qualifies as an Erotic Coupling story in my eyes, not a Romance story. 4 stars

AZTT2AZTT2about 4 years ago
Great story

Very enjoyable story. No, marriage is not required to make it a romance

JupiterMarsJupiterMarsabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you all for the views, favorites, comments and ratings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
One of the very best authors

JupiterMars is one of the very best authors in Literotica. Indeed, it is hoped he is submitting his work to larger public.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
Say what?

This was a pretty good, albeit transparent story which became clear as soon as Sharon introduced herself with her last name and he introduced himself only as Daniel. So we all (the commentators and I) are in agreement with the fact that this is a better than average story, what's with the preoccupation with which genre to put it in? Is it Romance or Erotic Couplings? Who cares? Some people have nothing to worry about so they have to invent issues. The story gets a 4*, the commentators get 1*.

dkws7466dkws7466about 3 years ago

Very nice! The plot was predictable, but still a good one. Good writing as well! 5 🌟!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But really too much story before and after the single sex scene.

Needed much more foreplay. Teasing.

Needed many more details of the sex. Just rushed. Too automatic. Too little tension.

Had real possibilities. Didn't deliver.

Three stars.

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