by JupiterMars
BUT! The one thing missing to make this a Romance is he did NOT ask her to marry him. SO this only qualifies as an Erotic Coupling story in my eyes, not a Romance story. 4 stars
Very enjoyable story. No, marriage is not required to make it a romance
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This was a pretty good, albeit transparent story which became clear as soon as Sharon introduced herself with her last name and he introduced himself only as Daniel. So we all (the commentators and I) are in agreement with the fact that this is a better than average story, what's with the preoccupation with which genre to put it in? Is it Romance or Erotic Couplings? Who cares? Some people have nothing to worry about so they have to invent issues. The story gets a 4*, the commentators get 1*.
Very nice! The plot was predictable, but still a good one. Good writing as well! 5 🌟!
Interesting premise.
But really too much story before and after the single sex scene.
Needed much more foreplay. Teasing.
Needed many more details of the sex. Just rushed. Too automatic. Too little tension.
Had real possibilities. Didn't deliver.
Three stars.