All Comments on 'The New Role'

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MaxiJMaxiJover 19 years ago
very interesting story

Pretty confusing at times when you switch from day to day... maybe if you had labeled the different days it wouldn't have been so.

But i did like how she had to finish all the 'tests' in order to wear the costume. I enjoy all your stories and highly recommend everyone to bookmark this author... Jane

Moxon4Moxon4over 18 years ago
Good job

Great story, loved the concept of having her earn the costume, would have liked to have seen them play in it more, but a very good story

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