by spkfantasy
...to all 5 episodes of this story, but I've chosen to place my public comment on the first episode because there are probably many people like me who don't ususally bother with the rather vague novels/novellas category and in this case they are really missing a great, well-developed story.
It appears the German to English translator is having a bit of a problem. Perhaps one or the other of the languages is not his or her native tounge. The story thus far is just okay. Nothing to rave about. Cheers!
Correct - english is not my native tongue. However, I hope that the text is readible enough despite some odd terms and phrases.