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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
keep em coming!

Great story, cant wait for ch. 2. It was great how you added litlle snipets to be able to continue the story if you so choose to. Hopefully you will.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very Good

Enjoyed the story, and I hope there will be more chapters to follow. This has the potential for a good follow up. thanks

SlickTonySlickTonyabout 17 years ago
I'll Probably Read the Next Part, Even So

While the story itself was not bad--it had good pacing and dialog--it was rife with dangling participles and misused words. The author would do well to avail himself of an editor next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago

Loved it man! U r the best

justme601000justme601000about 17 years ago
Talk about phenomenal???

Oh please.....MORE FAST...PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
PERVERT

YOU are a perverted little wanker,look at the score I gave you,you cannot beat thrashing your meat.

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Great Story!

Sibling incest is just too hot! You gave us great beginning.

Give us more!

Naughty_MistyNaughty_Mistyover 13 years ago
Hot

What an amazingly hot start!!!!

Crusader235Crusader235over 7 years ago
Still

2017 and still a Hot as Hell story! Excited to read the rest of it.

goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
hot story

wow - very sexy. i wish you were still writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

weaker than my pullout game - 2 stars

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