All Comments on 'The Newborn'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting start

What a way to keep us hanging ;) It's ok the story starts really good but I don't think I am going to like what the brother is going to say. Can't wait.

baikalisanbaikalisanover 14 years ago
why oh why

do you tease me this way!?

write faster imo :P im greedy

spearman1spearman1over 14 years ago
Dangit!!

That's not all that your giving us!? Oh poo!! That's just mean.

GlosUKGlosUKover 14 years ago
Yeah

A new story and an intriguing start. Bring it on DK :) PJ xx

MaiDawtonsMaiDawtonsover 14 years ago
Best by far

This is by far the best story I have read on this site! Great job I can't wait to read more!!!! Interesting from beginning to end and you made me care about the characters. Also the way you describe things is amazing! My only complaint is I have to wait to read the rest!!!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Hmmm

Definitely intrigued. It's quite dark and I was surprised by the incest. Not sure if I'm going to like that but I'm ready to be convinced. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good but...

wish you'd cont. with the tabitha wolf story instead

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