All Comments on 'The Next Song You Write About Me'

A fun read, looking forward to more.one thing I don't get is the characters reaction to what they found out-love is love. Maybe there is something wrong with me I don't know. As an adoptee ( something I've know since a young age) to me EVERYONE is fair game. If the attraction is there and it's consensual why not act on it?

Really enjoyed this story. I mean jeez, you can write and weave a tale. Write more of anything you like, it will be good !

Enjoyed the story quite a bit - right up until near the end.

If I had to choose one side character mentioned to hear more about I'd go with Sperry.

I have a similar opinion on the ending of the sexual relationship between the two as tlk2me has. Also, having both them feel and express the same feelings about it at the same time stretched my personal suspension of belief a bit too far. The close bond was one thing in the story but this, for me, I read with an increasing sense of incredulity. I figured at least one of them would have more than some reservations about ending the sexual relationship, at least for a while. Maybe that's mainly me though.

I don't comment on stories. But. Holy hell, I thought your world building was real. I Googled the TikToker, the band, everything. I skipped the sex to read the plot, expecting the actual taboo aspect to kick in with Sperry later. Masterfully done, in the future, if you write it, I will read it.

It was awesome. Love the bit with Jesus Christ Superstar thrown in. Good job!

In and of itself, I guess the story was ok. If this had been a creative writing assignment, my rating would have been high. As a submission to a site that is expressly for erotica, not so much.

Might have been able to remove 3 or 4 sentences, and met requirements for PG.

So yes, good...really good writing, but not much of an erotic tale.

Fuck me, now I desperately want to hear those records.

A really well told story. 5 stars. I would like to see a continuation of this story for 1 more chapter, going into the reactions and results of the discovery.

The Rotors!

More Jamie & Hester!

You’ve knocked it out of the park with your first two stories. I didn’t see the twist coming here at all, and it gives the story so much more depth and realism. You really nailed the mercurial passion and angst of long-term trysts. I’ve had a few Roxies in my life and those scenes hit deep.

Can’t wait to see what’s next in this little universe you’re building.

I loved everything about this story and it ended perfectly as well but I still want to see more of Roxie and steve, maybe a follow-up on the fantasies? Roxie's pegging and the threesome for steve, maybe a threesome with Sperry perhaps (hehe), I can't imagine Steve and Roxie going for a threesome considering they both had a mental breakdown when finding out that they're related, but it's fiction so I am going to hope that it will happen or will just imagine that it did, can you tell us what plans do you have regarding Sperry? Will she be involved with someone mentioned in this story or her story will with someone else?

First if all, thanks for the gorgeous, secondly the beanpole nickname. Sent me down a very happy memory lane..

Now the story was lovely, awesome really. Would I have loved to see them get together?, yes absolutely. But the story isn't mine to write, so I'll leave that to you the author.

Well written but often confusing. Maybe I need to read it again, but I barely made it through the first time. Jumping back and forth in time, too many characters and unexplained situations. You have talent. I like your style but I didn't really like this story. Thanks for sharing, though.

Well-written, of course, and a nice resolution for Jamie and Hester. Very textured plot, it's obvious you put a ton of work into it. It doesn't fit the typical Incest/Taboo story profile, here I was expecting him to get dumped and be consoled by Sperry. I would classify it more under Erotic couplings with a twist ending. Anyway, 5 stars!

Spare a few tears for dudes so fragile that just mentioning TikTok or reminding them that LGBT people exist ruins their daily scheduled wank. (I do recommend asking permission rather than forgiveness though when using other authors' inventions.)

Very well written stories. The time lines were arranged great! More stories please!

Loved both your stories but I want an actual happy ending for these two. And don't do it "off screen" like you did with Hester and Jamie. You remove the meat of the love story that way. 5*

I have just started reading stories on this site but this is the best one so far. I would love to hear more about Sperry and Amy two characters that most definitely had my attention.