All Comments on 'The Next Step'

Wonderful bit of story telling with good sex writing something believable. Thanks for sharing.

A beautiful story. Thank you :)

Many of us older folk love sex, it is meant to be enjoyed and shared. Sex is the best medicine, oral is at the top! Thanks for the sexy story!

I’m not sure I can go back to work in my shop the same way now.

Amazingly sensual, erotic and romantic! This story blew the roof off the 5 star scale!!

I really identified with his feelings about how much he missed the touch of a woman's skin and the toll age and loss takes upon us. I'm seventy and my wife, though not dead, has continuous multiple health problems that have put sex out of the question for about a decade. I miss it. But, I'm old and, to use a term no longer much used, unprepossessing in appearance. So I beat off once or twice a week and sometimes write what my libido leads me to imagine.

Five stars. There were 2 or 3 places where an extra word appeared--like you changed the wording but forgot to delete all of the previous choice.

Thanks for the story.

Really really really enjoyed the story... one of the best in Lit...Ten Stars

Please another chapter in his shop on their own.

So she can see him

Thanks for the story. It to closely mirrors my experience. My wife is gone on and I’d like another female friend but age and health issues get in the way. You made the event come alive for me. Well written with a few proofreading errors, very few.

Loved the positive message. I liked the formality of the ground rules too.