All Comments on 'The Next Step'

I started laughing so hard it ruined the mood. :(

I didn't get to INSINUATE. I left when she said, "We have to talk."

"we have to talk," in my part of the world is a break-up phrase, not an invitation. At the point you introduce this statement, there's no foreshadowing that there's been a relationship to end. That hurts your story from the get-go.

Did you write a good story? No.

Don't lissen to the other comments, this is a great story! I can't wait to read the next one. I would love to hear more about the couple next time though. Great job!

insinuate

verb

1.suggest or hint (something bad) in an indirect and unpleasant way.

"he was insinuating that she slept her way to the top"

2.manoeuvre oneself into (a favourable position) by subtle manipulation.

"he insinuated himself into the king's confidence"

synonyms: worm one's way into, work one's way into, ingratiate oneself with, curry favour with;

Some people don't appreciate our language !