All Comments on 'The Night'

One of the best stories on this site. Please keep writing!!!!

Nice little hot story. Good descriptions and no nonsense. HOT!

A Fantastic story! My wife and I have been married 42 years. She is 68 and I'm 74, and deeply in love with each other. I was feeling some movement with "Mr. Willy." That doesn't happen too often, so your story had a very desirable effect.

The self-delusional power of those that believe in the tooth fairy. Amusing.

Very well done, thinking you could very easily add another part or 2. Like your style, very sensual, and realistic.

Aw, thanks everyone for the comments! Not sure if there will be more to this story yet...we'll see.

Good premise.

But sex moves ahead much too automatically.

Four stars.

Amazing..soft loving. wonderful.. A true loving first night of love and sharing..

Please keep writing!!! I love your style. So sensual. Best story I found here so far...

this was great - thank you!