by YDB95
Wow, thank you for this Hot little story! So full of promise, just like their future. Love young Love. Five Stars!
I've been reading the 750 project stories, and a lot of them sacrifice dialouge to fit the limit. I'm glad yours didn't. The playful banter between the two said more about their relationship than twice the narration could have. Nicely done.
This story is ridiculously hot!!! Thank you! What a fantastic ultra-short story!!!
Mighty brief, but full of promise!
I'd love to hear more of these two as their friends/lovers relationship develops. Echoes of my distant past!!!
Kisses and nibbles,
Val