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by PennameWombat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Simply magnificent

This is one of the finest and most erotic pieces of fiction I have ever read in my many years on this planet. Delightfully slow and sensuous oral sex between two people – but not lovers – on a train in the middle of the night. Please continue your efforts so that many others may enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot!

A really well written vignette with a nice buildup to a smoking finish - nice work!

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...