All Comments on 'The Night We Fikked the Jinx'

by The_Wolff

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Whimsy? Welcome back...

...after your 3 year hiatus. This submission reminds me of "Jabberwock".

The_WolffThe_Wolffalmost 14 years agoAuthor
wow... Lewis Carol?

This is the most complicated and twisted 'slipstream' erotica I've tried yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

For a surreal fantasy story, I couldn't believe how hot and wet it made me. The words dripped with nasty juices. They made me moist. The details made me see the humiliation, hear the grunts, and feel the tense/hot connection between the master and slave. The way he used her was a turn on and he used her in a very inventive and unique way. Now I will go back and read your other stories.

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