All Comments on 'The Night with the Wolf'

Tell us more about this incestuous union of brother and sister. Is Elijah's mother still living? Will he make her his and his sister's lover also?

story, 5/5 hands down.

Hopefully in the future you could add to it, and turn it into a multichapter story. Drag out the seduction and further adventures of the pair.

while their father fucks his mother, graphically? Way to get your story kicked off the site, if someone hasn't already reported it for breaking the guidelines; cardinal rule, no underage in ANY sort of sexual situation, didn't you read the T & C's?

this could easily be a multi chapter story......I hope you continue it!

i think the underage thing meant for them to be actually involve in the sex not as witnesses.

Brilliant story, well written and different. This is how it's supposed to be done.

Re: "So 12-year old Elijah & Liz have to watch" -It's really amazing how many fucking nerds there are on this site. In case the nerd hadn't figured it out, the twelve year olds were not having sex.

*Sigh* I suppose nerds need porn too...

All I can say is wow the was a damn good story the title throw me off a lil but damn that was a good ride of a story beautifully done and well written

Great story I love the way you write and I loved this story

Thanks

ABSOLUTELY GREAT story...was riveted...THANKS!!!!!!

Awesome story nuff said

This was a great story and he wants it kicked off of the site. Hell no! I hope everybody gives it Five Stars!

I love the mix of rich unique words and modern slang it's very intriguing to read good job

I like your story very much. I want more like it.

The author's use of modern idiom in a pseudo-medieval setting works well, even though it shouldn't, but the author has done a good job of making the two work together in a fantasy that's pretty damned hot too! This story doesn't feel like it's over, and I hope the author feels that way too, as we could definitely do with more of this, with perhaps a dash more humour?

The other commentators getting at anon.about his comment re 12 year olds involved in a sex scene, even if they're not participating, and the fact they're forced to watch, not eavesdrop on, a pretty graphic sex scene should perhaps think about what they're saying, and what he's saying too, even if he seems to have zeroed-in on that one scene rather than looked at the whole context of the story, and does raise a small concern with me; where does the line between including a child in a sex scene and involving a child in a sex scene actuallly stop? The author may not have actually overstepped the bounds, but it's close, and I wouldn't be surprised if some busybody hasn't already reported this because of that same blurring of the distinction between the two; perhaps Laurel/Manu will have to take a view.

I'm pretty sure those weren't in there when I resubmitted the story, as it was only 3 pages long. Not sure how that happened. I'll see if I can fix it.

you put the story in twice

My only hitch with it was when he unzipped his pants. What was the time frame of this story? Continue with the story, please.

Why couldn't the dude rape both his moms, some randoms and his sister? You could have packed like 10 times as much rape sex into this story.

Certainly different from what I usually read on this site, but the fact of the matter is, I loved it!

Please continue !

I love how this story is set back in time! It jut doesn't make the situation horrifying but makes it amazing since you know both of them love each other. Please make more of these kinds of stories!!!

It seems that you've attempted to write a "time period piece", which, from what I can tell, is either mid to late eighteenth century. With that said, then you should know that the zipper wasn't invented until the 20th century. Otherwise, I thought you wrote I nice story. Keep up the good work!

Read this for the third time now. Well written and always enenjoyable. Love to see hlow their future turned out. Hint....

Five Stars! I really enjoyed the story.

I only I could give them to this wonderful story. The originality and cleverness here is awesome. I didn't want the end to come so soon.

I hope hope you write a secound ch for this

....what more can a fan ask for? Thank you so much for sharing your talented story telling! Kiss!

Damn, this is good.

excellent story

Really creative and fantastic story.

Really loved it even on the third reading!!

Well done? Perfectly done! Even the zipper thing is no problem, with a little imagination. A parallel universe need not follow exactly in the time frame of a sister universe. Especially when the brother universe has a hunger for his sister universe's flower and she a thirst for his seed.

(12/1/2022) JuanTwoNo Said it all for me. This was brilliant! Five stars and goes on my list.

OH WOW! Can't say more.

what happened with his mother?

Well it not erotica enough I expect raw wild and power erotica scenes where he wild claims her pussy with wild abodoment never giving a a moment of rest ,claiming her in every place of his house with her scream of pleasure so all will know ,she is his n his alone ,them make her his slut ,wife and his breeder to give birth to as children as he deserves