All Comments on 'The Nightingale Agency Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good start

Wonderful what this new guys issue is? Is he gay, or is it something else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Interesting series of scenes. Wonder how this series will develop. Don't leave us hanging

ZephreckZephreckalmost 8 years ago

I very much enjoyed the fact that your story isn't rushed. Even though I am not gay I could still relate to Luke and enjoyed seeing that Eve truly cared about each character in the story.

I like that we know a few things about each character but it is obviously setting the stage to hopefully tell more about each as well.

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago
Wow

Just started this after reading your two other stories in progress, and your biography. I really think your writing is superb:) I read Lit mostly for the sci-fi and non human stories. Quite a few stories that our unique and deftly written, as our yours. Just a little erotica can go a long way in the hands of a skilled story teller such as yourself. So thank you for your excellent efforts:),,,,,,,,,,

Ed:)

Admiralbird348Admiralbird348over 5 years ago

Ugggg! Sorry, are and are, not our lol

SummoreSummoreover 2 years ago

Great detail and story telling! Loved the unhurried pace and the exploration of hidden desire.

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I write things. Sometimes I share them here, but maybe only less than 20%. Yes, I know I have a few unfinished stories...and I will finish them all, eventually. I appreciate the time you take to read my musings; please vote and leave a constructive comment. As the saying...

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