by AfterDusk
Wonderful what this new guys issue is? Is he gay, or is it something else.
Interesting series of scenes. Wonder how this series will develop. Don't leave us hanging
I very much enjoyed the fact that your story isn't rushed. Even though I am not gay I could still relate to Luke and enjoyed seeing that Eve truly cared about each character in the story.
I like that we know a few things about each character but it is obviously setting the stage to hopefully tell more about each as well.
Just started this after reading your two other stories in progress, and your biography. I really think your writing is superb:) I read Lit mostly for the sci-fi and non human stories. Quite a few stories that our unique and deftly written, as our yours. Just a little erotica can go a long way in the hands of a skilled story teller such as yourself. So thank you for your excellent efforts:),,,,,,,,,,
Ed:)
Great detail and story telling! Loved the unhurried pace and the exploration of hidden desire.