All Comments on 'The Non-Standard Man Ch. 05'

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sailandoarsailandoarover 9 years ago
Wow! . . . . .

. . . I don't have your facility with language, so Wow is all I've got at the moment. Sorry & Your Welcome.

Flymaster60Flymaster60over 9 years ago
Nice one

Very Nice story.... I really love it so far... Andrew seems to be hiding something like he is waiting for a key word or question to be asked when his AI gets him closer to being human... 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awesome fabulous wonderful intriguing smutty sexy hot

Please keep writing this story, I'm enjoying it so much! I check everyday to see if there is a new installment, and judging by the comments im not the only one! Now waiting to see what happened to the possible pregnancy? Hugs and thanks to you MissPrim!

MissPrimMissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks! Yes, the story will continue

"Please keep writing this story, I'm enjoying it so much! I check everyday to see if there is a new installment,"

Thank you. A writer loves to hear those things!

Chapter 6 is in moderation, and should post around 10/28/14, moderators willing. Chapters 7 & 8 are complete, meaning the first draft is done, and Chapter 9 is nearly complete. Writing ahead helps me to make sure I pull in all the story threads in the right chapters and lets me backtrack if I need to add some details.

Look for a new post every 2 to 3 days until the story is complete. I'm projecting that at Chapter 15.

Again, thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Everybody: this is a great story! Well written! Read it!

Well i liked it - a lot! So im trying to get the word out (with last tritan folk) and now the people who read comments btw so happy you like my comment - and it's still all true you write wonderfully - but - i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now (who am i kidding i want ch 7,8,9!!)) so is everything ok? When might the next chapter be submitted to the literotica queue? Peachfish

MissPrimMissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 6 Angst

"i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now"

So was I. It's been in the moderation queue since 10/26. I asked Laurel about it, and she got back to me early this morning. Some of the submissions (I wasn't the only one) had technical difficulties. Her IT person told her not to post those stories until the issue was resolved. Happy to say Chapter 6 is now posted.

Thanks for reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
you keep the story goin

i like how the plot develops bit by bit every chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good stuff. Excellent writing and a wonderful imagination. Thanks for posting. 5 stars.

MissPrimMissPrim2 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous Thank you.

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