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Click here"Andrew!" I screamed.
"Evaline!" he cried. Andrew gushed his release and pumped me furiously, as if he was no longer in control. After a few more strokes Andrew fell and rolled to my side. He stared upwards, his eyes wide as if he was in shock.
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My heart slowed to a normal pace. I turned my head to the silent robot next to me staring at the ceiling.
"Andrew, are you okay?"
"Yes," he said, though his voice was faint.
"Are you sure?"
"I'll run a diagnostic," he said flatly.
The minutes stretched as he lay motionless next to me.
"All systems are functioning normally," he said abruptly.
"You don't seem normal at all," I said.
He sat up in one swift movement.
"I'm fine," he said. "Go to sleep. You have golf tomorrow."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoGood stuff. Excellent writing and a wonderful imagination. Thanks for posting. 5 stars.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoi like how the plot develops bit by bit every chapter.
MissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor"i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now"
So was I. It's been in the moderation queue since 10/26. I asked Laurel about it, and she got back to me early this morning. Some of the submissions (I wasn't the only one) had technical difficulties. Her IT person told her not to post those stories until the issue was resolved. Happy to say Chapter 6 is now posted.
Thanks for reading!
Anonymousover 9 years agoWell i liked it - a lot! So im trying to get the word out (with last tritan folk) and now the people who read comments btw so happy you like my comment - and it's still all true you write wonderfully - but - i was really hoping to be reading chapter 6 by now (who am i kidding i want ch 7,8,9!!)) so is everything ok? When might the next chapter be submitted to the literotica queue? Peachfish
MissPrimover 9 years agoAuthor"Please keep writing this story, I'm enjoying it so much! I check everyday to see if there is a new installment,"
Thank you. A writer loves to hear those things!
Chapter 6 is in moderation, and should post around 10/28/14, moderators willing. Chapters 7 & 8 are complete, meaning the first draft is done, and Chapter 9 is nearly complete. Writing ahead helps me to make sure I pull in all the story threads in the right chapters and lets me backtrack if I need to add some details.
Look for a new post every 2 to 3 days until the story is complete. I'm projecting that at Chapter 15.
Again, thanks for reading!
Anonymousover 9 years agoPlease keep writing this story, I'm enjoying it so much! I check everyday to see if there is a new installment, and judging by the comments im not the only one! Now waiting to see what happened to the possible pregnancy? Hugs and thanks to you MissPrim!
Flymaster60over 9 years agoVery Nice story.... I really love it so far... Andrew seems to be hiding something like he is waiting for a key word or question to be asked when his AI gets him closer to being human... 5 stars
sailandoarover 9 years ago. . . I don't have your facility with language, so Wow is all I've got at the moment. Sorry & Your Welcome.
