All Comments on 'The Not-So-Nice Canadian'

Excellent! Please keep writing!

A very good first story.

Hot and sexy topped off by a good squirting orgasm, great. Oh I and love nickname. The slightly rougher moments were well balanced out with glimpses of Dani's more caring side, well done. The passion felt by both was so well written.

Thank you for sharing.

I'm sure there is a fantastic story roaming inside your head. You were so busy watching it you forgot to include us so we could enjoy it as well.

@stroudle and Hhr: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your kind words! I already have a few more stories I'm working on, so be on the lookout for those!

@baron: I'm not entirely sure I follow your feedback. Are you saying I didn't spend enough time with details, that I should flesh out the events more? I'd like to clarify that so I can work on it for my subsequent stories :) thanks for the feedback!!

Just discovered your very well-written tale! Hope that you will do some more erotic interaction between the sexy Squirtle and her very hot Canadian pal - maybe including some more sub/dom (or switch roles) with some bdsm added for extra flavor. Looking forward to your next story - hopefully soon!