All Comments on 'The Note'

Ohhh, poignant.

Thanks for sharing.

Sweet. Nice twist at the end. Wow!!!

5-stars & Favorite

Just the right number of words and adult ending and sentiment. Well done.

Well written, nicely paced and a hell of a good ride. All that and she was nice enough to free him for the happy ending he can now create.

Thank you!

Nice twist.

I guessed wrong at first. Until I started reading I was hopeful that the story would be "Chevy Van" by Sammy Johns. I liked the story. Keep writing.

A bit dark, in that there was no hope of the "happy ending". But nicely written; I liked it.

"You can imagine his surprise - when he saw his own eyes"

There's supposed to be a young child in the back seat. "The one little thing" her husband couldn't give her was a baby.

Well done. Class not course

But surely a 5, not a 1 ;-)

excellent 1