All Comments on 'The Novelist Pt. 06'

it all Added up to a solid read overall leading to a first rate cliffhanger ending. ****

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Let's see what's next. Keep up the good work.

I have been waiting for this chapter and it did not disappoint. This is my favorite story that has been published on this site. I cannot wait for Chapter 7.

I have been checking everyday for this chapter I love this. OMG I rescheduled everything when they come. Please hurry but take your time on the next one. I love your stories

Hmm, interesting. Very vivid, but at times, I do wish the story would progress much faster. Still, great series by the way.

I'm falling more and more in love with this story. And while I can agree that it may seem like its going slow, it really isn't. Any story worth reading builds your anticipation, moving your further and further to the edge of your seat.

Trust me, the rest will be well worth the suspense.

A great chapter , it sets up the next chapter perfectly. The wait for the next chapter will be worth it

Thanks

Excellent wind up to the next chapter! The story is very well written and I have really been looking forward to each installment! Keep up the great work!

I am waiting with bated breath for chapter 7!

"flare", e.g., flared nostrils

"flair", e.g., you have a flair for cooking.

Please don't ruin an excellent story with poor orthography.

Marie(mom) is her son's slut! Jane(aunt) is Tom's pain slut and anyone will use her and abuse and she will Always cum! The worse abuse the bigger the orgasms!! The next chapter may be the end. It just keeps getting more awesome!!

Nice story design, can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm loving your series! I don't know where you are going with Jane. I really like Marie a lot more so I hope I grow to like Jane since she seems to be the favorite! I can't wait to read about the drama that will unfold in the next chapter!!

I just posted the next part. It should be available in a few days. Thanks everyone for the comments, votes and support.

I have enjoyed this story so much more than I thought possible.Your explanations of things D/s made sense to me as no others have .The hard work you have done writing this has certainly paid off for me.It is my sincerest hope that this a long,long series.It has become a daily ritual for me to check this site for a new chapter.I look forward to being able to read a great many more.Thank you for your time and effort and your obvious talent and skill as a writer.Please consider this to be a somewhat gushing rave review. Thanks again for posting here.

I keep looking for Chapter 7 among the new stories and it hasn't been posted. I really enjoyed the story so far and am waiting for the next chapter. Frustrating.

i have ever read on here...if I could give you a 10 then I would...you rock

Unnecessary, imo. But not my choice, so there you go. Otherwise a great pleasure. Other episodes get higher marks because of my distaste.

I'm not a big fan of water sports either but I love the degradation it imposes and her eventual acceptances of it. I talky dug the way you've describe her slow and gradual acceptance of her inner turmoil and the unconscious decision to allow herself to become her true self. I'm lovin this whole story line

[tongue in cheek]

BELOVED SIR

pretty good for a beginner. . .

One Eternal Heart

I was a little upset with the attitude of some of the characters in this story. Then it hit me its just a story. Who gives a crap about if I don't like a way a character behaves or acts. It just a story, COULDN'T put it down.

Love the story but hated the piss bit.

WTF….I know it’s only a story BUT you nearly fucking ruined this story for me with the pissing crap. ⭐️⭐️⭐️