All Comments on 'The Nyanny Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Like the first part, not so much this one

I liked the idea but when your wife suddenly switch to homicidal bitch mode that's not cool.

OK so they don't have rights and are more like pets, but would you let them hurt aa pet out of cruelty? Unlike the later bdsm play this was not it.

So sorry but I'm out.

PervOtakuPervOtakuover 8 years agoAuthor
You're right, actually.

Anon: You're absolutely right. The misstep came about because I conceived this scene when I still thought I could explore the entire bioroid concept through this one family. I was more concerned with exploring the limits of the bioroid than I was in a realistic depiction of a polyamorous household. I took Amanda too far and then handwaved it away too easily. However, during the proofreading of this I came up with a follow-up scene for somewhere down the line that revisits this and explores it a little better.

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