All Comments on 'The Nymph's Pool'

Too bad I can't give it more than 5 stars. For me, this is one of the most romantic and best stories I've read so far!

Did they really need Joella? Seems to me that male and female hormones were enough to spark nudity. But what the heck, Joella gave them a valid excuse to get naked. All in all, it's a great story.

A wonderful romance and one of very few that I give five stars. Well done.

Just came back to this after a long time. It's still my all time favorite story on this site.

We have always loved being nude in the mountains. Love the stories

Thrilled to be discovering these "older stories" and their authors that put Lit on the map. Quality does last!

I read this a few years ago but didn't realize it till I was about half way into it... so I kept reading. I can think of a few times in my younger years where something like this almost happened... but didn't. <LOL>

Lots of hormones and a nymph for encouragement. Very realistically done with a lot of pleasure.

Needs continuing. Qnd more info on parents going with them.

This is the second story of yours I have read, and again it was a pleasure to read someone who can write.

About the clamor for a continuation, I don't think it needs one. That is, I don't know where it would go. If the story was about sex, then yes, it could take them off in several directions for different adventures. But this is a romance: they have discovered each other and they are going off to college together. Either they stay together, eventually get married, and live happily ever after, or they split up and find other people, and I'd rather not read that. (I should say, I'd rather not read it again. I read a really long story on here about a guy who falls in love with his cousin, but then she decides it's wrong and breaks it off, they both get married, he loses touch with her, his wife dies, and they finally get back together in their 50s. Lots of sex along the way, but more drama than I want.)

Well done!

Very enjoyable story. Wish there was more.

Fantastic! Looking forward to day 2....&3,4,5,,,,,

I've come back to this one a few times. Each time I enjoy it just as much as the first.

Great story, very fun and sexy. Captures the innocence of nudism perfectly! Would definitely like to read future chapters with the kids and parents returning to the pool and letting nature take it's course.

Great story, but it begs continuation.

I share the opinion of many. This excellent story deserves to be continued. For those of us who are nudists or naturists, the author writes as if they have also had the euphoric experience of social nudity. Good stuff - hope to read a sequel at some point.

When is the next chapter coming out?

Beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it.

DocWords

oh wow

so so very good

well done

great series. I can imagine the fun the "kids" will have dropping innuendos of their parents nicknames to watch the parents blush and reactions. Perhaps no need for the top bunk at the cabin anymore?

Happy nude day indeed. Delightfully written tale of discovery

Another excellent story... easy to see why this won a writing contest. Thanks...

Also wonderfully written, thank you (again)… :)

PLEASE, give us more! Really enjoyed this! The couple reflected innocence, passion, and an Outlook on life I often find missing in people at this age.

One of my favorite stories. Always leaves me with a smile no matter how many times I have read it.

Cute story!

Thanks for sharing.

Really enjoyable reading a story so well written. 5*****

I love the way this story develops. Good job!

Great story!!!! To bad no other chapters where written. Could have been an interesting few more chapters.

Thanks!

Love your stories.......the natural intimacy and romance between the couples makes a very nice read.

Can develop a story of soft gentle sensual love making, while others can write of sex.

Enjoyed your story.

Well done!

I quite enjoyed this story.

Quite a cute story!

Thank you for this fresh story. I like to know the location of that paradise 😉

Natural pools often have such spirit that make difference with all other places and favors love.

I'd enjoy following Josh and Maya until and as they attend Beaverville (pun intended), sharing room, I'd hope, and life as students.

Unexpected story, gentle, sexy. sensual love story.Wish would continue as they enter same college.If not, gentle interlude. more implied. than explicit. Enjoyed the feeling of sexuality awakening , and.exploring.Makes me nostalgic for my remembered youthful exploitations.Now in my 70's. remembrance is sweet

One of my favorite stories on literotica. Gentle and amusing.

I think it would fit 'Romance' better than 'E&V', but that's not a great issue. I agree with other commentators that further stories about this charming couple would be great!

This is the best National Nude Day story I've ever read in all the years literotica has been publishing them! I love how you build your stories and the sweet, gentle people with which you populate them.

Like others have said, about this story and your others, I wish you could continue adding more chapters. The characters are so compelling I want to know more about them and their sexual adventures.

Thank you!

Great story, unexpected twists, if I was the girl though, I wouldn't have been satisfied with just that first session, 'round 2 anyone?'

What a great little story. Just as great the second around time after I stumbled on to it by chance.

Beautiful story. Thank you.

I hope this story has a few more chapters in it. I would love to hear more about these two and their futures along with them discovering whose parents where who. Thank you again, writing is great, please give us more.

Noel5474

I love the idea of the nymphs at the pool the sacred energy and the magic of the sweetness of their sex, I love the innocent and young and true nature of a sexual act being magic and wholesome. I wish there were nicer words for pussy and cock but any way , subtle and soft respectfull and not pornographic. my experience of this type of thing is so precious to me. I love ther idea of a PAN like character and a water nymph making out or several nymphs .

great story with good characterization, descriptions and pacing. well done!

You have a special way of writing, so well paced, so natural and real. You make the reader not only enjoy the journey but to be able to visualize the people and scene. Thank you for another great read. But I notice that you apparently have not written new stories for quite some time. Wish you would start writing again, and updating/adding to your existing ones.

This story has been illustrated and may be read at http://www.illustratedlovestories.com.

You have done it again, thank you, What a beautiful story and so well told. !!

I was capativated!!! Brought back some memories and fantasies. Thank you for sharing.

One of the best stories that I have read. Here and there, there's a bit of grammatical errors, but that's negligible compared to the beauty of the story.

Just the right amount of sexiness and story, not over the top but not dragging or too long.

Very enjoyable. Where's the sequel?

Simple, fun, light, and honest.

As with the Class Nudist, I was very sorry to see this story come to an end.

Thank you.

As with your other great story, The Class Nudist. I read this is and found another great read, and also the good guy getting the girl in the end makes for a better world.

Great story though I was kind of hoping to see additional chapters maybe Maya and Josh at college and talking to their parents, All in all A really well written piece and I look forward to the other stories

Great story, well written. Thanks for improving the universe. And tugging out some wonderful old memories.

I am a bit late in finding this work but then a good thing lasts.

This work is a GOOD thing.

I am about to start further down your submissions and hope I wont find a sequel.

Call me a nutter but I like to let a good story fire my imagination,

I really enjoyed this story! It was sensuous and erotic and very much like some adventures we've had...my wife and I love to hike nude and skinny dip as well as lay out nude on the boulders and feel the sun on our naked bodies. Thank you for the wonderfully sexy tale!

DKP

I really enjoyed this and Class Nudist. The natural innocence and curiosity leading up to very romantic sexual escapades is so euphoric. I feel wonderful after reading them. I'm very adventurous myself, yet prefer the romantic side of sexuality to the wam bam thank you mam type.

that was really nice. like sweet nice. sweet erotic even....yeh, enjoyed that. i dont mind a good build up to the erotic part either, fleshes the characters out more and def makes them seem more real

I read your "Class Nudist" story and did not realize that I had already read this one quite awhile ago and intended to come back to read some more but possibly lost my bookmark. Anyway I re-read it and loved it as much as the first time I read it and at the end discovered that I had left a comment.

It's a charming story with delightful characters and they are different than the two in "Class Nudist", which is a complement since some writers always come up with the same characters time after time.

Thanks again!

This story being about three years older--prior to--than "The Class Nudist" of Carson and Emmy, there is a distinct difference in style, emotions, feelings and character development. That's not saying this story of Josh and Maya is any less entertaining or fantastic. Both stories are similar to having a male and female parent, different in hundreds of ways, but their results are apparently similar. One can tell, after reading both stories, they were written by the same author with the same great efforts of charisma, feelings and emotions are evident and well displayed throughout both endeavors.

The theme of this story is unique and unusual, the characters are not as charming as Carson and Emmy are--maybe because Maya came several days later, leaving Josh with half a week of self-study and intraspection. The dialogue of all this story's characters, Josh and May, the parents childhood friend's Mike and Carol, all played their parts to the nth degree. The details are sufficient to give this reader an awesome visual of Josh and Maya in all their playfulness in and around the pool.

The bar for sensual and loving couple's young adventures has been set somewhat higher by this tale of budding and blossoming love! A treasure unto itself!!!

Great tale !! Well written !!

A lovely story with believable, charming characters always makes for fun reading. Great job. This is the first of your stories for me and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Thanks!

Great story told w sensitivity and love. Always nice when there's caring and sensitivity.

Well paced

Very nicely done!

A very sweet story!

How do I get to meet Joella?

What an excellent story. I got to know the characters, not just the actions. You have a true gift for writing, and you could easily branch into other genres. I'd love to read more about these two, please consider writing a follow-up!

This is the best story I have ever read. A genius stroke of the pen. It leaves me all warm and fuzzy. The emotions conveyed to the reader are just wonderful. Keep up the good work. I am so happy that you have such warm feelings and can transfer those to the reader. Absolutely wonderful.

Very very nice. Almost a religious feeling. Reverent!

I think you did a great job of creating realistic characters and easing in on the sensuality and deep feelings that grew between them. I was actually surprised at the extent to which their relationship moved over the course of the single story, and yet nothing felt forced or out of place. I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

It's nice to know that there are other bunny-monkeys out there.

You have a wonderous way of blending words that draw images in the reader's mind. You have a knack of drawing out the important details and allowing the lesser parts to fade to the rear. There were so many facets unfolded in this story, yet none were not to be believed. The story was edited perfectly permitting one to be drawn into its folds without the distractions found in so many others. Thank you. Please continue to share with us.

I am much more into sweet than into raw these days, and that was sweet.

it was brilliant, PLEASE write a second chapter to this!

Another excellent read. Thank you.

loved the story, it was full of passion and excitement and sensuality. i loved how the characters fell in love, and then shared that love with each other. well written all around. i hope there is more to come!

Good story...felt almost like two people wrote it though. You described everything very well except for the sex part. You rushed through that part a bit. Have a good day.

-A.

Much better than a lot of the crap here. Actual depth to the characters. Is there going to be a second?

For all of us who have longed for or long for true passion,

romance and love, this story was filled with hope.

I can only suppose that the author knows these feelings

as well.

kind of a romantic tale,,i was engrossed,,,dropped the f bomb only once i think!,,will read it again,,,story flowed nicely,,,there is certainly room for more chapters here,,,please consider it!! and thanks for a heart warming and romantic end to my evening!!

This was a very well written story it flowed smoothly and kept me entranced as to what would happen as old friends found each other, thank you for such a wonderful tale.

This is such a great change from the straight-to-fucking stories on here. The back story built up the characters very well, and everything flowed perfectly. I really like the concept of Joella, and the older couple showing up at the secluded pool. I thought it was very tastefully done, and the length was just right. Thank you so much for sharing your talents with us!

That was an amazing story. Thank you!

Definitely worth five stars. :)

there are lil types of magic in this world when i hear my son laugh the smile of my wife and a story like this is one of them and one of a kind and hard to find

as far as i could tell there was hardly any profanity in it it was all kinda nice and romantic i liked it

That was magical alright, nothing kinky, dirty, guilty or illegal in the real world. 4 pages and really just one sex scene yet worth all that came before it, 5 stars!

It's little gems like this story that make this site so great.

Enjoyed your story immensely - good writing.

Thank you WatchingCloud for a touching, believable and sweet sweet story...

This story needs a sequel in which both sets of parents wink at each other about going to visit their friend, "Joella," and their children following them to learn which couple was which as to screamers, etc.

But I put in my vote for no swinging between the couples. Their kids seem likeable and responsible and do not need a distraction and bad example of their parents swapping. Rather, just have the parents in a loving and public display to honor "nude day."

Just a terrific, sexy and very arousing story of being introduced to nudity, which is just a wonderful part of life. If only places like you describe were not more common. Too many uptight people easily shocked and unwilling to relax and enjoy au natural. Thanks, and let's see more stories!

One of the better stories I've stumbled across on my wanderings of this site. Keep up the amazing work!

What my fellow critics didn't mention was whether they thought this story deserving of the grand prize. I thought so.

please please continue this story!!

lovedd it!...okies so iam a little late arriving to the site for thenude day festivities myself, but i am hoping to find a follow-up story in WatchinCloud's submissions list...WOOHOO! i wanna go swimmin now...

that was, by far, one of the best pieces i have ever read. my hat (and clothes :P) are off to you! please please please write a follow up!!