All Comments on 'The Obscene Fire of Samhain'

I can see a follow-up coming next Samhain! Nicely done!

Oh man I hope there is more on the way!

What? Not sure where you left us...5*

Great imaginative story. Hoping of more to follow. 5*

Very hot, very sexy.

Please tell us there is more. They deserve each other's company

Excellent story and very well written. A sister possessed could be interesting

You left us hanging very much by our imagination. I need more and certainly hope you continue this.

A delightful twist on the usual bro/sis incest tale. Very enjoyable, looking forward to the follow-up as the sidhe appear to have taken over Fi. You can never outdo the afterlife .😜 I shall have A look at more of your stories.

Incidentally I think your profile picture is beautiful.

Very nice. Defenetly needs another part could also be a very interesting little series.

Great story, engaged me completely, excellent work by the author. But, this story demands more and another chapter or two to finish it properly. Please do so.

Scores a well deserved 5/5.

I didn't get the ending? why did he not finish the sentence?

Man cmon though! You seriously pulled the bad ending thing? Not only did the Sidthe get screwed out of watching an erotic act of inbreeding you took it away from tbe readers too! You fucking sadist lol.

What a delightfully seductive and vindictive author you are..... 3:)

Pay no attention to the mortals in the comments, this story is quite obviously finished exactly is. And let that be a lesson: not to break dealings with the Sidhe!

Asking to ruin such a delectable mystery with an answer, totally defeats the purpose of a Ghost Story and breaks the magic of Samhain.

Absolutely don't finish the cliffhanger!

I'm not much into spooks or spirits but considering the season I gave your story a try. You told a good tale and I enjoyed it. I'm not sure about the ending. A tease for a sequel? Or a chance for my imagination to roam wild? Thanks for a good read, in any case.

Amazing writing! The way you describe the sexual details and pelvic floor muscles, is both beautiful and graphic—I can imagine every vein…great job! It’ll be in my brain for awhile ;) Fantastic use of pagan ritual. Maybe we get a Beltane sequel?!!

Just re-read this. Still five stars .

Incredible detail and descriptions! However bummed there is no sequel yet. 5/5

Absolute fantastic. Your story abound the handcuffs sibling and this is masterpiece. Kinda hoping you write something more like this or even better, a sequel for both of that story.