All Comments on 'The Observer'

... in both meanings of the word.

Certainly a better story than I could construct.

Your words perfectly described the sound and feelings of an old.house. As a college, student, after my Army career, I received free lodging by house sitting for an elderly lady who was spending the year in Florida. Her.house was exactly as.you describe this.one. The atmosphere and the sounds of an old house can be overwhelming. You gave me chills with your description. I was so overwhelmed my first night alone, that I actually slept in my Jeep with a.pistol in my hand. I never did really feel at home in that house. I think it smiled at me when I.finally moved out. Thank you for reminding me of those feelings. If I had read your story first, I don't think that I would have stayed there. P.S. I never did go upstairs to the second, or third floors.

The vengeance of the masters house! Well written and crafted to make you FEEL as though you are in the house yourself.

Great verbs!

So short but so sweet!! What prose!! Ominous how the house looked out for its absent master.....

I'll be wary next time I think about Cupid....jeez!! Horrible....

A match made in Loving Wives hell.

5-stars!!!

That was so perfectly written! I am jealous and thankful.

5 stars

Loved it

Absolutely brilliant, the house is the main character. The man and woman are in a spiderweb which judges their betrayal and inflicts punishment and they never realize that their fate is in the balance. Brilliant & well written.

Horror, passion and justice in a neat passage, a delight.

Isn't incarnate of the body ? Vengeance incarnate should be a person , not a house.

Me likes this story

I'm running out of adjectives.

What can I say, except, this is a 5-star masterpiece. The pictures painted really drew me in. Fantabulousderful!

It needed a new word.

you are obviously on some sort of an ego trip.

this story is a great story.

5/5

The house is alive essentially, taking vengeance on those who did wrong.

A lot!!!

How'd thing go for you today?" Just fine and dandy thank you. Signed: BTW

A great Faron Young song makes a great comment for this story

Just excellent. What a pair of low life's. 5*s.

It doesn't get much more ironic than that.

Wish my house had done that.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Very nice.

Hooked

I really liked it. Five stars ⭐️ for this one.

This short little vignette would make Poe proud. As the house settled back from its outrage, you can almost hear it say "Never more".

Yes! Good House! I wonder what you get a loyal home for its service? Fresh paint, maybe?

Cupids arrow, appropriate Well told, a great story, a great read, very entertaining

Good short story. However, I think it would have been an interesting ending if she had survived.

different but good!

Excellent, like the other house story. May I please buy this wonderful house and care for it a Generation?

Brilliant, short but so different. However I would like another author [with permission] to change the end. She lives and we see how the consequences play out.

Great short story. Not an ending I would go for, but I still loved it.

very imaginative. A most original story - loved it.

Wow! Well done! The hint of promise in the other story is fully realized here!

Wow! Well done! The hint oof promise I saw in the other story is fully realized here.

`wow an amazing short I like the idea of the family home protecting the family but being wise enough to understand betrayal just good

Your writing of foreplay and seduction is a work of art, building in intensity with the characters own lust. Your command of language and vocabulary speaks volumes. Your imagination is refreshing and I am horny as hell. What more is there to say?

Beautifully written; original; thank you. 5*

Loved it!!

Outstanding effort!

Brilliant! Thank you.

A story of fate and fatality.

FANTASTIC!!

Wow - an amazing story packed into such excellent prose! You are a wonderful storyteller and an excellent writer. More please!

Me thinks the Great Aunt stayed to look over her blood kin. 5 stars.

Great story, very well written and very well told. Thanks for sharing it.

5 stars.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Don't fuck with "living" homes.

Now that is one BAD dream! Coming Or going.

Although hubby probably won’t be too upset.

Five stars.

Should of been in erotic horror 🤷🤷🤷🤔🤔👍🙋🙋

Perfection.

Creepy and well written. The Cupid statue falling was quite dark and ironic.

Daaaaamn, EA Poe would have liked this one, i think! I sure as hell did!

DAAMMMM! Very cool.