All Comments on 'The Odd Bunch'

Sequel Please

But I found it very hard to read.

Averygoodlay except didn't think it was interesting,Was stupid made no sense

Sounds like more is coming (no pun intended). A full family orgy would be nice. Not real believable but still fun. Gave 5 stars because it was arousing and the writing itself was not to bad. Please write more, I will read it.

max052

believable - maybe not - but damn good story. hope there is more following

I hope you keep it up. It is excellent that this is your first erotic story. You have talent.

There are many possibilities for the story. Looking forward to reading where this goes. Remember... opinions are like assholes, everyone has one.

Wish there was a part two cause damn did this make me needy