All Comments on 'The Oddest of Set-ups'

Sorry, The first two pages disgusted me so much I could not read more. No rating

Religious brainwashing vs common sense.

Absolutely fantastic story

5/5

This is my favorite of all your stories!

Thank You

Awesome story. +5 Stars

Nice story and nice twist.

A very nice and interesting read.

Thank you, an excellent Christmas story.

Definitely a 5

Well done and thank you for a lovely story. Well structured with a clear narrative; good characters; many surprises; and you brought it all home successfully.

You lost me at a guy being dumb enough to attend a sorority party for anything but a good look at all the airheaded bimbos. Nobody want to dip their wick where a frat boy has been before.

@Anon 'Sorry, The first two pages disgusted me so much I could not read more. No rating' What exactly was disgusting about the first two pages? Two worlds colliding with each other? Or anything else? I thought it was a good story. The first two pages were actually interesting, like the rest.

A Hallmark Christmas story. Well told and written. I don't like the MC's very much. He's absolutely perfect and his GF is absolutely perfect too. Sort of confectioner's sugary but their actions/ideas were consistent throughout. 5*

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Great story.

Story does not have any tags -Cmon. Be a gentleman.

Sweet love story. Didn't see the twist coming at all but certainly gave it drama and it was handled well as part of the story.

Damn I like your stories!

Lovely. We’ll told. Five Stars.

a story you just could not stop reading wonderful

Great story. Thanks

Excellent! 5 stars. There could easily be a sequel, but you don’t need it. Very well done.

What a true pleasure reading your words...

Very nice! Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Great story and an enjoyable read.

Auston was smart to not let Amanda "scare" him away with her "purity ring". I knew lots of very religious girls growing up who were very creative in the ways they were willing to "bend" the rules. You just have to be aware when women are testing you with a "shit test". Simply put, a shit test is an easy way for a woman to test what kind of a man you are. As a guy, don’t take a shit test too seriously. Women are just doing it to protect themselves. It isn’t about you, but more about what they’ve been through. Don’t let a shit test throw you off your game. Auston passed. You can handle it too.

Lost me on page one with the talk about religion. Sorry.

Thank you for telling this story. I‘m amazed by your plottery and the stories arc, wow.

I've sort of come to detest the almost obligatory page 6 downturn and drama in romance stories here, since it's so often just a badly executed by the numbers thing in an effort to adhere to the basic story tension curve.

Here it wasn't all that spuriously contrived though, and all in all I felt it was well done.

There is very little among the top romance stories here that I haven't read, and while I can only give you a 5/5 I don't think that you being at the top of the Romance stories here is all that unwarranted..

Take that as you will, I'm just going to take a deeper look into the other stuff you've published here....

My second reading Great story.. ...but like many Literotica stories it ends to soon it would be nice to have a chapter 2 to tie it up.

Does Auston gets drafted, has a career in pro football or physical therapy?

Does Erica ever clean up her act?

Will she meet Auston's mom?

This is a phenomenal story. Thank you for the time and effort you gave to write one of the best stories I’ve read on Lit. I like other commenters wished that the story would be continued, even as an epilogue to see what becomes of Auston, Amanda and Amanda’s family.

Every time Frankie.

Every damn time...you leave me a sobbing, deeply satisfied mess.

I may have, well, ran outta batteries on this one.

Thank you!!!!

Every time Frankie.

Every damn time...you leave me a sobbing, deeply satisfied mess.

I may have, well, ran outta batteries on this one.

Thank you!!!!

Holy moly, there we were, just driving along gently in our story, thinking we all knew our eventual destination, but then you opened a big box of whoop-ass-crazy, with secret weddings, SiL a ghost from the past and a possible kiddie in his future! You suckered us in, but it was worth it, you also made me laugh out loud with junior offering to make it a hat trick. Many thanks for both writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Even without the sex scenes this is an excellent story with a great twist. Still need a proof-reader, but this was great.

Well done. Great ending!

At one point in the story I was so caught up in their love, I was afraid something bad would happen. I would hate you for that. Well, something bad happened, but you allowed their love to win. I loved you for that. KUDOS!

Pretty powerful. Well written.

So the DNA test was clear in regards to him not being the dad but I noticed when Elly read the papers, she didn’t mention Tyler as having a number. Just a small oversight I’m assuming

Re. the most recent Anonymous' post:

"So the DNA test was clear in regards to him not being the dad but I noticed when Elly read the papers, she didn’t mention Tyler as having a number. Just a small oversight I’m assuming"

My question: who is Tyler?

Couple 1 = Elly & David (Sr.) (Mother & Father): numbers 6 & 4

Couple 2 = (David) Junior & Amber: numbers 9 and 3

Couple 3 = Rickie (aka Erica) & Antonio: numbers 2 and 7

Couple 4 = Auston & Amanda numbers: 5 and 8

+ child = Jackson number 1

Great story. This is my 2nd or 3rd reading. Is there any possibility of a continuation?