All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 021-030'

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I don't normally care for second person - it's a bit weird to be honest, but this is a good series with some hot concepts.

Fabulously erotic.

The idea of one woman grooming him for another is a bit odd, but I like it! Not sure what to think of the fact that Sabrina knew Gemma was interested in him first. The 2nd person narration doesn't work for me (and you occasionally slip into 1st), but the pacing is excellent, and it's a great story so far.

She fooks nigs?

Really good story so far!

Like the others, I don't care for 2nd person POV and the occasional switch to 1st person is distracting.

I like the idea of wardrobe consukting turnring into much more. And Moiseh is casual and a back character.

It has been a while sense I enjoyed a story as much good telling and I like your writing style. I enjoy reading what he is thinking and what she is thinking man is she on the edge? Keep up the good telling.

Really awesome story

Interesting in second person. Detail is hot. Concept is unique. Very entertaining!