All Comments on 'The OF Girl Ch. 041-050'

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This is such a great series with every chapter setting alight a unique set of events. Love our Aussie girl and Sabrina is a great character a perfect foil for the love interest acting as fire starter for cleverly crafted erotic capers. I am also really enjoying how other women in the office (Bec & Vera) contribute to rising tide of sensual tension in this story and the way our hero is left to manage what may be real or potential future joy at their hands. Garrison is a great character full of surprises whose quiet manipulation of our interns is so much fun and filled with such promise for the future.

Even though this is one of the only stories I’ve read in this site that mentions visiting a STI clinic to safe guard its characters, it totally shoots itself in the foot when the characters ignore the nurse’s advice. Such a dumb plot device.

So, I know this is fantasy and all, but it's more than a little jarring trying to keep the suspension of disbelief that these 19 year olds are able to get drinks so easily, especially in a big city at fancy bars, when the drinking age is 21 - they'd be getting carded constantly, because no fancy/ big/ popular place is ever going to even joke about doing anything that would risk losing their liquor license.

Thanks for the kind words, all!

@Sparks - The main characters are going into their final year of University, and are 21.

I love this story! I hope it never ends

I'm really enjoying this seies! Please keep them coming

Only one word necessary: BRILLIANT

loving it! thank you !!

So good. Love the settings and predicaments you put them in. Sex is very hot too!

Deposition dizziness was amusimg.

I haven't commented yet because I am so enthralled in this well-written story!

So happy I found your stories here, your style is easy to read and gripped my attention immediately.

Thanks, and on to the next chapter!

Perfect opportunity for the line "That's what she said."

The story gets better as we move along lot of what if and how’s so good writing and good story keep going.

I am really enjoying this story

I really love the humour !

What a lovely story. Fun, sexy and creative. Great stuff!

Really enjoying this story. I’m glad I waited before starting it so I can now go through it without waiting for new sections.

Really hot story