All Comments on 'The Office'

Super hot. I’d love to read more!

Great story! Please continue this story.

Please add another chapter. I really enjoyed the story as a whole and can't wait for more

This story is excellent. But would be fantastic if there was at least one more chapter

Great story.

Very well paced, nice built up and most of all, very sexy and erotic. Looking forward to the additional chapters. Thank you very much.

when you described yourself as having a few freckles i really perked up, i adore redheads and was never attracted to barbie doll types, the fact you described yourself as regular is super sexy to me

I usually don't read domination stories, but this was interestingly erotic piece of fiction. Yes, fiction so no need for readers to get all torqued up about a bit of fiction.

........ I enjoyed it, thanks.

Thank you everyone for your comments. Makes me feel good about my writing! I did start writing what began as a prequel - how the two met and started but it got much larger than expected. I have like 100 pages or more on word docs and I’ve barely gotten into the sex. Its turning right into a full blown story! Someone suggest I actually post it as a ebook when done to Amazon or elsewhere. Unfortunately I hit some rough patches in my personal life, got really down, and its been hard to get back into the story. I open it up but can’t seem to pick up where I left off. Maybe I need to be back on here more and see if all of you and others can help me get back onto the mind set! Keep your eyes out, hopefully I’ll have more to post soon. xxNichole

I apologize! I was thinking of my other story for the prequel!

This one though I have tried to write a part two but still in the works! Keep an eye out!!