All Comments on 'The Office Christmas Party Setup Ch. 02'

Really enjoying this series. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Having and rewarding decency is good, even in erotic stories.

This story is so good, and has so much potential to go in so many possible directions. 5 years after the first chapter, I hope that we don't have to wait 5 weeks even for the next installment.

Bravo!

Even better than the first chapter! With the way this one ended I hope there is a third Chapter somewhere between fantasy and Publishing! Please don't wait 5 years for the next chapter! Some of us may not be around to enjoy it!

Cheers

SAGE

OMG, it's only taken 5 years! I thought the first chapter was great. I am sure this one will be the same.

Q uestion!

Should it be 'Denise'?

Or 'Denice'?

You have used BOTH spellings!

Any other errors?

j

Truly enjoyed reading both stories and would love to read the next one.

A great storey, I presume you will write another chapter, I’m wondering what may happen with the daughters. I’m also looking forward to his weekend with the CEO’s wife. Keep those fantastic stories coming. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Fantastic story, and I'm routing for Betsy! I love reading your work and I would love to read the next chapter of this story, but I'm not holding my breath. I'm really hoping you don't abandon this story or Camping Exposure, Wild Horse Ranch, and many others, you leave too many stories unfinished. I've been a long time anon fan and very very grateful for your time and efforts to bring the world amazing entertainment. But I beg you, please finish your stories series before moving on to another. Your work is amazing and I thank you!!!

What a twist?? Hope you continue just don't take so long... 5 Stars all the way !!! Rooting for Betsy too!!

WOW What a follow up.. In the next chapter may be Jen can find out just why Sam married Richard and sample daddies dick after Sam is finished with it and everyone gets a taste of Betsy too

All good. Maybe Betsy would consider sharing him down the road, or learning what it's like to have a poly fffm relationship. He's going to have a VERY good time, no matter how this ends up. The daughters? Just another fun wrinkle in his life. Maybe Sam will actually share Richard with her sis, Jen needs to relax a little. Maybe the sisters take Dad together.

In addition to the existing compliments, I want to give kudos to the development of each character's personality. No one is perfect, yet their traits seem consistent and realistic. I especially appreciate that each woman he dates has some flaw or incompatibility [married, wants a child, just wants sex]; these attributes eliminate the reader from thinking 'one woman is perfect' and supports why the dad still sees them all (for various fulfillment).

Absolutely in red series so far, I really hope you keep it up and maintain the great balance of story and action you have so far!

I wish this story had more parts. I’d love to see him go farther with Evelyn and his daughters. Such good storytelling

Uh, so if Marie got pregnant with Jennifer, the *youngest* daughter, a month before the marriage, then Samantha, the *older* daughter, was conceived even before then. But, Marie and Michael only had sex those two times just before the marriage.

In my opinion, the whole scene back at the house with the daughters didn't make much sense, and seemed very implausible.

Good other than the definite mixup in ages. Jennifer is the oldest, not youngest. And only thing that also works with his age.

Loving how this series is developing 😀

Love your work. Please continue this storyline and keep writing in general.

What does Richard think?

Excellent story, so far... need "the rest of the story"! Thank you.

Excellent story in spite of the minor mixup with the daughters ages. Like some others I agree we need some more of this story, too many unanswered questions...

Please add a conclusion...