All Comments on 'The Old Crone'

Sorry I could only give this a three as a story, it started well but it reads as though you run out of steam half way through and could find the words to finish,

But then again it is in erotic horror

I had suspected she was a succubus, check that spelling. I also wondered if she was like the gypsy clan from the movie Thinner. This was written from a male’s perspective. I noted another story by this writer that read like a male author. Still both stories were excellent stories.

Bruce