All Comments on 'The Old House'

Good to see you writing again!

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The beginning was really good, I was sort of expecting the story to follow the house and/or the neighbourhood for a bit there, maybe along the lines of people needing to get back to working with and respecting the land, and thought that was a very refreshing way to make a story.

Then it abruptly changed to something else.

Very up-front and personal with a strong focus on a single person. It is a decent story, and the theme is well in line with today's idea that everyone should have some sort of issues and break out of some sort of heterosexual shell.

I keep thinking it would have been a much more interesting story if it was told along the same lines or perspective as it was it the beginning, the plot could have been pretty much the same but I would appreciate the fresh perspective a lot more.

A really well written romance, gender be damned.

Good story...AL

Good little story with a slight twist, just found you so in for a treat I hope with your back catalogue, thsnks

Very nice story. Maybe we will see more of these two when Sharon brings mary to visit.

Pappasleaze!

Very good story. Poor Marion just couldn't seem to get it together. Always a straight and curious about the other side. Well it seemed she did go to the other side kicking and screaming literally.

Had a lot of fun reading. 5 Stars