All Comments on 'The Old Man'

by ronde

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KinPAKinPAabout 1 year ago

One of the most beautiful stories I’ve read in a long time. Bravo Zulu!

Smiffy69Smiffy69about 1 year ago

Lovely. A lump in the throat tear inducing story. Thank you. I go to your stories as soon as they are posted.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 1 year ago

How do you do that? make your readers be involved with the characters so they feel like they are part of the story not just a reader. It was beautiful.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

One hell of a love story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another gem. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Refreshing. Surprises. Classy. 6 stars

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 1 year ago

Very nice! Loved it!

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 year ago

Brought a tear to my eye.

stewartbstewartbabout 1 year ago

life and love is a circle ... unbroken.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

If a movie is made on this story it will be a blockbuster.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Simply outstanding! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

DeepTrance3DeepTrance3about 1 year ago

Beautifully written. Glad I came across it.

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

I was surprised to find tears in my eyes at the end.

A lovely well written tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Best story I ever read in Literotica

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lovely short story.

Two nice people enjoying each other's company. Grand!

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

Love the ending, deja vu!! A really moving story. Well done. 5⛤

jlg07jlg07about 1 year ago

Wow, very moving story!

Crusader235Crusader23512 months ago

Excellent story, and thank you for the happy ending after yanking tears out my eyes. Five Stars.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

46yr old waitress - horrible to picture

utdomutdom5 months ago

An incredible, but very credible, story. Thank you!

afosi2604afosi26044 months ago

Another very enjoyable read!

JerryDancerJerryDancer3 months ago

A great story! I got a little lost with the time jump ... I'm thinking a double space or other mark would have helped me there ... but I got caught back up quickly. As I said, a great STORY with a beginning, middle, and end. Thanks!

EVLoverEVLover2 months ago

Another wonderful story! Definitely worth 5*****

As a man in his 70s, I could definitely relate to Bryce and some of his playful bantering. Yes, I enjoy looking at the teenagers and 20-somethings with their tight bodies yet I wonder what I'd do with them if I ever "caught one"!

I also enjoy looking at more mature women with their softer curves. I have a better sense of what I'd with one of them, if I caught one.

Catching someone probably won't be an issue for a while as my wife of nearly 50 years is still around and we still enjoy "messing around" with each other on occasion.

As always, thanks for sharing your wonderful stories with us, ronde.

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Women tend to be the central characters in my stories, because I find their complex personalities to be fascinating. My stories come from my life experiences or the thoughts inspired by people I have met. I am an avid fan of history and especially the history of the America...

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