All Comments on 'The One You're With'

Well done. Nice pace, and an innovative development of an old theme. Thanks, and keep writing.

Spectacular, a fantastically sexy story

I'm not sure what just happened... but I'll admit, I ended up skimming a lot because it turned out to be quite confusing. Seems like Rachel had the same power Terrence did what with her wishes coming true - I was hoping she'd realize that and turn the tables on him and get a decent life back... not whatever the hell happened to her.

This was genuinely interesting and enjoyable, not just smutty (although it's great smut too!)

Please keep writin!

Agree. A really good well written story. Hope to see more from you!