All Comments on 'The Ongoing Conflict'

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AlexBaileyAlexBaileyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

This is a rewrite of my first literotica submission. The first version was a disaster but I've learned a lot since then. Enjoy!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 3 years ago

A clever piece, even better on the second read, with more knowledge at hand.

Thanks for sharing.

SilkeeSmoothSilkeeSmoothover 2 years ago

I started to see where this story was going, and immediately thought of Fight Club, except with a sexy girl in lingerie 😀

Very creative story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done! Keep up the good work!

MaryannePetersMaryannePeters11 months ago

This was really clever. We have to talk!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I liked it. Nice plot twist. Really clever.

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Lifelong CD, non-binary, fluid, pan - kinky for play and lots of tight and shiny stuff. I love skirts, dresses, leggings, swimsuits, wetsuits, straps, straitjackets… If my avatar caught your eye you should check out my Amateur Pics Feedback thread - there’s a link in my foru...