by Susan88
Great begining, please continue with this story soon. I liked reading it & I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
More! Your story is a wonderful beginning. I enjoyed reading it. Please write the next part as promised & do so soon as I can't wait to see what happens next.
Wonderful start to what should be a great story. I hope you will post a second chapter to this story soon. I really liked reading this first part.
I agree with those below, please write chapter 2 soon. This is a great beginning. It has been too long since this chapter was writen.
Why did you stop writing? Great start but you should continue writing this story. Please do so soon.