All Comments on 'The Open Road'

sweet writing......loved it!!!!!!!

Hotter 'n a red hot pepper and cooler than a beer straight out of the ice bucket.

Odeon, you got some mean talent for writing.

turn up the sound, wave good-bye to the big city and watch me headed for the country! Thanks for the memory jolt and the thoughts of Texas dust. Well written and delightfully just the level of crude I was hoping for today.

Thanks.

I read almost half. That is all I could stand of some redneck fool with an IQ of 80.

but a honeymoom to remember. TK U MLJ LV NV

when a thought crosses her mind, it is a short but lonely journey

until you tried to sell a "loving husband" sticking his shit covered cock up his wife's unprotected pussy. The vaginal infection that follows doesn't carry any sort of love with it, nor does it make a decent story.

Anonymous, your comment about the ass-fucking is spot on. I agree with you, it had no place in this story. I felt the need to take things up a notch, but that just showed a lack of creativity and laziness on my part. Wish I could rewrite it ! Thanks for the excellent feedback.

The characters are supposed to be wild and crazy, but they only came across as moronic dumbasses. Unreadable.