All Comments on 'The Opportunities of Youth'

I think you need to carry that story further.

Please learn how to use quotation marks, as they’re really important when trying to convey a conversation. I only made it a short way through before I had to reread sections to make sense of them, because of the lack of quotes. After several occurrences I gave up.

This was an exciting story and I sure wish it was me!!

Keep them stories coming!

Oh the memories of coming of age. Sharing those glorious moments when we first saw or showed. The first time we saw that look in another's eyes watching us as we came for them and let them touch us and joined as one. Thanks for rekindling the thoughts!