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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
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Love this. Good start to the story. I love the idea of having no control, being at the mercy of a program. I hope there is more chapters coming along.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Really need more

This kind of story only works if we'll written, the concept is pressed simple and it's about execution. Well you've pretty much nailed that because I really want more haha. Great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love the orb!!!

Great start. Can't wait to see the next programs... Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Damn fine story!

I can see this being a very popular read for so many reasons...

David781David781about 7 years ago

Wow! Looking forward to Chapter ...

:D

thekeenreaderthekeenreaderalmost 5 years ago
A superb idea

Brilliantly described....so much potential

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very well-written

Excellent use of imagery and description.

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