All Comments on 'The Order Ch. 05'

if you stop now...i don't know what i would do because that was absolutely perfect...

Did anyone tell you that your story was delicious? And like the poster below me said don't stop writing. If you stop writing, I'll drag you by your ears! LOL. Great writing! Very sensual!

i crave stories like these, please keep going.

I want to know about how "fat" Nadia is. An exact weight would be nice so I get a mental picture. I'm just so confused about how she should look.

I read all five in a row - and they suck you right in! The chemistry between those two is so intense....I'm dying to read more, please!

Again, I loved it! You should find a publisher. I don't think anyone would hesitate to publish this(: <3 Lillian, KR.

very hot

I am so happy to see another 50 chapters to read in the Brethren Series until I catch up. No waiting - Yea. Seriously, this has all elements for a great story, characters, conflict, good, evil and hot sex. Gotta go, more to read!

You made playing in water fun ....lol

And playing with yourself..... ;-P

Love it :)

Very addictive....

I cant turn my eyes from it!