All Comments on 'The Original Sin Ch. 01'

Hope to read more of this story!

I hope for more of this story and hope she gets even with them all cause seems she knew the blond and of course knew william

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In the midst of writing chapter 2 as an alternative story for Marguerite. The category might change but hopefully the story won't disappoint. Thanks for the suggestions regarding the revenge angle for Marguerite. Will be working on that angle for this alternative story. Looking to post chapter 2 soon!

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Disgusting pig shit!

You jerk, now,I need to rate all your stories1* for this abomination!