All Comments on 'The Orphanage Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Close, but...

You need to learn to spell and to proofread. You confuse "two" and "too" and often drop letters from words. You have Nicole fucking herself at one point, when it's Anne who's wearing the dildo. AND for God's sake, learn to spell "testes."

Anna Miranda

GyhyGyhyover 14 years ago
Great.

I love this story you should continue it. I want to hear more about the three horny nuns.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

This is a very hot story - women, not just men, determined to achieve sexual pleasure. I especially like the use of the word "penis" instead of "cock", which is so overused, and the word "breasts" instead of "tits".

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