All Comments on 'The Oster Bunny Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lead Us Into Temptation!

Believing more will follow for story line! Please???!!

Barepusslover

erosiawriter7erosiawriter7almost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

I will be adding more chapters eventually.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oooooooooooooooo good one!

Now look what you've done! Do you know how many Jessica Rabbit fantasies you just stirred up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
more please!

I would love to read more.... Does the power corrupt? Does the Church leadership (national, worldwide) get involved?

What happns with his wife? How is she converted?

Does he venture into the other realm? Perhaps with Maya?

One reminder: you have an alien creature. Remember to describe her attributes during every scene, and include dialogue and her reactions.

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I am a slow writer. I apologize if anyone was waiting. Just wrote a chapter in this sword and planet saga based on the works of antiquity. I think I probably have two more chapters to go in this odyssey.

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