All Comments on 'The Other Woman'

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that this author is so full of shit try selling that garbage to the garbage man.

Evidently the story is set in England where bigamy is illegal, so no our heroine is not Edward's wife the asshole is already married. The story is clearly written from the author's own perspective (luckily for us Cro-Magon species are extinct), and shows an alpha male fuckhead who dominates dizzy headed women. For our heroine the slut to call the her first sexual encounter with Edward as the best in her life as it is described by her own words means the poor idiot must never have been fucked before in her life.

We wonder who was Prince Andrew biological father is.Cromagnon you have gone to be like Britease.

I'm amazed at the geographical ignorance displayed by Americans.

This story was written in Australia. Even this ignorant South African knew that.

Apart from that I felt the story was well written although with tongue in cheek.

It is only a story after all.

As far as the second wife part of the story I understand it also very well. My wife and I searched for several years for a suitable second wife, they more difficult to find as most simply arent worth the time to bring them into a family. Enjoyed the story greatly.

are ignorant xenophobic shits.

Interesting story, but I think it needed a bit more time to develop several things. First was the seduction of Megan by Edward which was far too easy. Second, the decision to accept her role as a child bearing second wife was too fast. Most women do not take a day to decide to marry someone and have their children. Lastly, what about financial issues, as she is in truth not married to Edward. Some might think this is just nit picking, but these issues support the entire premise of the story in my mind.

One its a story and it did need a lil more development.Two I'm American and proud of it and I lived with my wife and our second for over two years so don't think it only the Brits I'm not Morman and I'm Poly.

Did I not see this on an epsoide of "Big Love" or "Sister Wives".... no wait...

Oh Well, a good story, nicely done

....this is party central and everyone wants to be on this side of the fence. Or they're just bitter. Like you. This aussie can come up with a plot but polyamorous living is crap. No wonder it's so hard to come up with a suitable second wife. the very notion is oxymoronic.

A sweet story, and filled with a sound background to make the characters believable.

I reads as if Megan might be a hot little girl who likes to have sex all of the time, and she found a couple that will give her what she needs.

I did want to read that Megan and Rachel would become lovers too and the three of them have a very satisfying sex life.

A very good read, thanks

...took up three-quarters of a (barely) seven line paragraph. Had to re-read it twice. Was this deliberate or accidental?

Overall, a nice emotional treatise on practical polyamory.

Too long, too boring and very little sex.

Being only vaguely familiar with Australian culture, I had to read closely to acclimate myself. I'm glad I did. This is a much better romance than Romeo and Juliet. It was a bit sparse with scene setting, but was a really good story. I don't understand the vehemancy of anonymous negative comments. First, it's a story. Second. I'll bet it's happened and it's nice when everyone can love each other.

I hope she has more and they love, cuddle and spoil all of them.

Thank you for a very nice, well-done story.

WTF, Five Stars!

NO DIFFERENT TO ANY OTHER MEMBERS OF THE ROYALS OR ARISTOCRACY GOT RID OF ONE WIFE TO HAVE ANOTHER JUST TO PRODUCE A HEIR...LOOK AT HENRY VIII......COULD HAVE ADOPTED...SAME DIFFERENCE AS FUCKING HIS MISTRESS TO PRODUCE A HEIR...HE JUST WANTED THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS...TWO WOMEN TO FUCK......

As always there is an interesting plot line and well developed characters. The idea of more than one wife is as old as civilization. The problem is always that of people respecting each other or not. No slut here!

If she is a willing whore, go for it.

So, she decides to apply for a job and by shear chance her new married employer is a man she for whom, after only a few days, she is willing to enter service as his life-long, unwed baby mama?

With that kind of judgement there's no way she should be procreating.

2**

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. All the naysayers are just making judgement based on their prejudices. Who you want to be your lover, spouse, partner, is none of my business unless you make it so. They made it Meagan's business, and she took the path of her choice.

I don't remember any grammatical or spelling errors catching my attention. Well done.