All Comments on 'The Other Woman'

I love this sentence:

"I want him because he treats me like his whore and fucks me like an animal."

That's a quote of the week right there!

Keep writing

Your excellence speaks for itself.

A sultry story, swerving from juncture to juncture with intelligence and emotional attention. I don't normally respond well to the control aspects of erotic pleasure, but your inversion is provocative and illuminates more than one perspective. Lovely tale.

beautifully done...i admire your talent

very erotic

Delicious and Hot, just the thing for that morning thrill!!