All Comments on 'The Overheard Conversation'

Please do continue!

An excellent start to a series. 😈

I can relate to this story. I t remind me of my mother and me.

You had a nice build-up going then started right into the sex part too soon over two lines of dialogue. No other discussion or natural hesitancy. Went from a 5-star to a 2 because of that.

Chapter 1?

Narrative didn’t flow very well, preventing me from buying into your story. Sorry! 3*

Why do I feel like the daughter is sleeping with the dad?!?

re: Whirling Dirvish

I'm sorry the characters got too impulsive for your expectations. I will take yor mostly constructive criticism to heart in my future efforts and ignore the rest.

re: Anonymous

Please message me with details about that!

re: amanap

You are quite perceptive. She does seem attentive to Daddy, doesn't she? I wouldn't be surprised if Dad was getting a BJ at halftime but that is not part of this story, so far.

This is an outline, not a story.

Like it very much. I hope you continue the story. I think we know how to get Daddy to stop drinking so much.

loved this- needs a chapter 2

Loved the story but it was to short!! And sister going to see daddy I bet I know what for you need to continue 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!

As a person from New Zealand I'm not sure if I'm offended or flattered. Maybe using Tasmania in Aussie would have worked better since they are known for incestual activities.