All Comments on 'The Package'

Great quickie with good characters and excellent writing.

Since you asked, I prefer these young woman/older man stories rather than the other way around. But older women and younger men definitely have their charms, too.

Thanks for sharing your talents!

-alextasy

ps...didn't know y'all grew peaches out there on the west coast. Are they as sweet and yummy as the ones we have here in the Carolinas?

Love that she (almost) immediately grabbed his package!

Perfect!

And your choice of "the brown truck" is Right On!

Sorority and dormitory girls watch for those tight-buns UPS delivery guys.

Ashley the same guys going to deliver your next package. Have you reordered

Hot read. Thanks for sharing.

Please keep writing

YESsss,...!!

Like Frank won't be back?

He'll be back, because he has the package she wants